Mentor Blogs

Cloudless by Molly Smith
        I chose this blog post because I thought it was a good mentor for writing something off of something else. I could completely see how the dance relates to the poem. I thought she did a really good job of connecting what the dance was about and the movements that the dancer used to what she wrote the poem about and the words that she used. I thought it was a job well done.

I'm On A Camel by: Louis Bonnet  
         I chose this blog post because I thought it was really funny. I liked how he took a picture that had nothing to do with anything slightly related to a camel and wrote a poem that was completely about a camel. Most of the blog posts that I write are fairly serious and I think I should start trying to write less like that.

Night Night Starry Night by: Tiffany Sabania  
        I chose this blog post as my last mentor because I thought it flowed really nicely as just a poem. I also thought she used a lot of poetry devices that we discussed in class. And just like Molly's, she did a really nice job of taking the painting and turning it in to something else. A poem. And I thought it was a really good poem.